pet, 29. travnja '05 u 01:41
Evo, ovo sam čekao dugo vremena, pored rpg-a na kojem se mučim ali mi ide, mislim da je vrijeme da vam pokažem svoje djelo koje je se nadam da će vam se svidjeti.
Bonds je serijal koji će imati sequel također kao knjigu, a kao prequel će to biti synopsis za 'Bonds' strip.
Ovo su naslovi:
1. STAR WARS (Bonds) - Mantle of The Force
-Comic Book - Synopsis-
2. STAR WARS (Bonds) - Gallean Conflict
-Book-
3. STAR WARS (Bonds) - Gears of Madness
-Book-
Posebno se nadam da će se ovaj serijal svidjeti EU ljubiteljima, to jest, ljubiteljima SW knjiga.
-- Priča je pisana na engleskom jeziku pošto ovdje mnogi znaju za moje protivljenje SW stvari na hrvatskom (ali neka to ne utječe na moj rad u vašem ocjenjivanju), a usto lijepše zvuči i urednije je (po meni). Istakao bih i pohvale Corran Hornovom 'Tales of the Jedi' koji je također na engleskom makar ostale ne smatram ništa manje vrijednima jer mislim da je trud prije svega najvrijedniji, kao i završni rad.
A sada, bez dulje duljenja, dajem vam prvi dio prvog poglavlja 'Gallean Conflict'-a koji će, kada bude završen biti izdan u Adobe formatu u potpunoj verziji sa svim dodatcima.
Uživajte u čitanju kao što sam ja u stvaranju.
STAR
WARS
= Bonds =
- Gallean Conflict -
Sixty-two years has passed since the Battle of Endor and the New Republic is almost completely recovered from the devastating war against the fearless YUZHAN VONG.
Following the death of the Jedi Master Luke Skywalker
and his wife Mara, their son Ben takes the responsibility to be the leader of the New Jedi Order…
As the peace blossoms throught the galaxy, a new conflict is at the horizon. In the Outer Rim, on the mining planet Haddon of the GALLEAN SYSTEM, a group of Republic Scavangers are causing disturbence by neglecting their dutyes to exploatate Crude Oil and thus decreasing the Republic's resources.
PALEGIS GANE, a brilliant young Jedi Knight has been asigned from the Jedi High Council to investigate the case and find a suitable solution to both sides. Howerever, Palegis will soon have to
face the choice which would deny all of the Jedi teachings...
Chapter 1 - part one
As they left the Hyperspace, Palegis, standing in his quarters watching through the window felt anxiety. ‘What will happen next? How will it end?’ - He asked himself.
He was always thinking ahead, and that was indeed his greatest strength and his greatest weakness. His Master always said to him not to be too addicting on the future, but instead to try to make things better in the present.
That was one of the advices that Palegis could never accept, or perhaps did not want to accept.
Then, as always, when he would dive into his mind and think, the same exact question would always came to invade him, to torture him. The nightmares he has; the nightmares he could not swept away, that he could not get rid of even with his Jedi meditation techniques. Master Skywalker always told him that it is not good for a Jedi to have an obsession; it was not good for anyone to have an obsession.
The same thing happened to his grandfather, the great Anakin Skywalker, later known as the ruthless Darth Vader - the greatest villain in the galaxy. The same thing triggered his transformation, his fall to the Dark Side. Palegis knew all that too well, he knew the whole story, almost every detail in Anakin’s past. He knew it because his Master would always repeat that same thing to him in hope to make him see, understand.
He couldn’t.
He wouldn’t.
The object of this obsession, Anakin’s or Palegis’ was LOVE. Love can blind one’s senses, his actions and could even bring him into doom. Funny, how that sounds so stiff and simple, but when one comes within the touch of it, all change.
One is ready to destroy worlds, to break up families, to stab his own friend in the back, to cry, crawl or beg just to get thing he wants the most – LOVE. Everybody wants to love somebody or to be loved. Nevertheless, sometimes it is just too hard or sometimes even impossible to achieve.
Padme Amidala was the key for the fall of Anakin Skywalker, and in the same time, her love towards him was her own demise and Master Skywalker feared that the same thing would happen to Palegis. Palegis always denied that, he thought he could bear with it, but the truth was he wanted to, but he could not. His mind would always go to the Igus, the only place where he would be happy and untroubled.
His thoughts were severed when he heard a bell on his doors. ‘Come in.’
- Said Palegis with a very quiet voice. The doors opened and one of the crewmembers entered. ‘Sir, we are here.’ - Said the crewman with a formal voice. Palegis slowly turned his head right over his shoulder, looking in the floor and just nodded once; ‘Open a com link and wait me on the bridge’ - He answered quietly. ‘Right away sir.’ - Confirmed the crewman and slowly, again, formally, left Gane's room.
Palegis looked at the dark planet ahead of him and prayed that this incident does not bring more blood and suffering. He prayed because he subconsciously knew that that will exactly be what would happen. Gane closed his eyes and for a few moments, he reached into the Force to calm himself and prepare for the things to come.
Then, he left his room and directed himself on the ship’s bridge to do his duty… the Jedi duty.
Meanwhile, the Republic ship did not get any answer from the mining colony on Haddon. On the bridge, the crew was trying to get any sort of response.
Captain Gyro Murdoch tried on every com channels, but there was no response; ‘This is Captain Murdoch of the Republic ship Auges, please respond. I repeat--’ His talking was interrupted by Commander Gane’s entrance on the bridge. All the staff instantaneously saluted him and after a few moments, continued with their standard duties. Gane came to the captain and asked a report: - ‘What’s the status?’
Murdoch immediately answered: - ‘Nothing so far sir, there is no respond. Maybe something happened to him, perhaps some explosion or--’ Again, Palegis interrupted impatiently as he didn’t want to listen anymore: - No Captain, that is impossible; that mining colony is one of the best secured installations in the galaxy, I doubt that someone would be capable to bypass the defenses.’
Then, a strange sense flowed through Palegis; as if someone just threw this new energy, this new power. It was the dark power, the dark side of the Force and Palegis could feel every little part of it. It looked as the planet itself was feeding on the dark side, much like the planet Dagobah, but there the dark side was natural and here… here it was somewhat artificial. However, it was not unreal; oh no, it was real all right; the dark side clouded every part of the planet, all of its inhabitants were effected by its power and presence.
Palegis made a grim on his face when he felt this strong concentration of the dark Force… he was indeed a little bit scared.
Fear… anger… revenge… all of these emotions were not allowed for a Jedi to experience, to feel. They should always stay calm, passive, and compassionate. He knew all that since he first became a Padawan, but he always had the problems with his emotions – he still does. Gane blinked and looked around himself. On the moment, it seamed as he had just wake up from a nightmare. Palegis was a little pale in his face because of the enormous concentration of the dark side; he never felt it that strongly and intensely.
‘Sir, are you all right?’ – Murdoch asked with a little worry in his voice. He reached with his arms with his arms so that he could help Gane not to fall. Palegis quickly stood up and said: - ‘I am all right Captain. Now, proceed with transmissions and I will in the meantime contact Master Skywalker for further instructions.’ Murdoch confirmed and Palegis left the bridge a little bit in a hurry, because he was in fact in a hurry for two reasons; He wanted to know from were does that great concentration of the dark side coming, and a second reason was a private one – he was scared and concerned.
He knew that he was not strong enough to resist the dark side because of his private problems, which were a great seat back in his Jedi teaching. Master Skywalker always pointed him that he should be ware of the danger when he was unspecific about his feelings, that undetermined emotions can bring a Jedi into a danger… a great danger, and thus can bring anyone else in danger who is near that Jedi. Nevertheless how strong he tried to control his emotions, he just couldn’t.
He love her too much and now it seems that this would be his last mission, that he would never see her again… if he turn himself to the dark side…
But if the loves her so much, then he will not fall, he will fight and prevail and he will stay and the path of light. Now, powered with this new positive energy, Palegis entered his room and activated the com link on the wall then transmitted a message directed to the Jedi Council on Couruscant.
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Guardian izmjenio poruku 29.04.2005, 01:42